The beginning of the story sounds frighteningly intimidating. Genre - black fantasy ... but see what happens next ...The use of non-typical terms needs to be clarified, I mean, the atrium ... it’s good to have Google and Wikipedia, and if it weren’t? And not all readers will look in Google.Some kind of unbalanced hero ... but easy to read. Words flow like molasses in a confectionery factory. The meaning of what is happening is clear.But the protagonist of some kind is not adequate ... eeee ... he also cannibalized to the same ... yes it is for sure, original, but you forgot to put the genre in tags - horror!The anti-hero turned out to be very disgusting ... the author skillfully managed to reflect this.It would probably be worthwhile to point out in Synopsis that there will be terrible, anti-humanistic values in the novel that contradict common morality.The novella is designed - strongly for an amateur of this genre - black fantasy.I was shocked ... after reading the first chapter ... well, what can I say to the author succeeded in his idea, to create a repulsive hero or anti-hero.Not a typical villain ... some kind of grotesque and Alogism - there are definitions in Google.The author is undoubtedly talented, brilliant, he can easily write an image of otgolkayuzogo antigiroya that the reader is not sophisticated genre - horror, it may even be somewhat shocked, disgusting manner of the protagonist. As I said, my familiar literary critic is simply creating an image of a hero. But to be able to show the image of an anti-hero, this is an extremely difficult task! Only by an experienced writer!Bravo, the author managed only in one chapter, to create such an image.Alas ... as a reader, the first chapter was enough for me, to understand that this is clearly not my genre.The author can only wish ... creative inspiration.
